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I'm a bit of a wussy during the day,
Sunlight Carmen doesn't like to play.
But then there's me just waiting to attack,
Your skin is Moonlight Carmen's favorite snack!
Her hair isn't dirty or matted like mine,
Poor little Carmen of the day time.
The blood no longer stains her clothes,
I simply can't wait for her to doze.
The rips no longer in her clothes or skin,
Her eyes the bright blue mine had once been.
I still can't believe that people rejoice
When she comes to their table and asks of their choice.
She's just so simple,
So unbelievably plain!
Night time Carmen can't wait to play again.
Sunlight Carmen doesn't like to play.
But then there's me just waiting to attack,
Your skin is Moonlight Carmen's favorite snack!
Her hair isn't dirty or matted like mine,
Poor little Carmen of the day time.
The blood no longer stains her clothes,
I simply can't wait for her to doze.
The rips no longer in her clothes or skin,
Her eyes the bright blue mine had once been.
I still can't believe that people rejoice
When she comes to their table and asks of their choice.
She's just so simple,
So unbelievably plain!
Night time Carmen can't wait to play again.
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Still not sure if I want to make this into a story or not and have no clue what I'd do if I did make it into a story, but I wrote this poem about Carmen last night so I felt like posting it. The idea behind the poem is that she's kind of developed a split personality for each appearance - one for how she looks during the day and one for how she looks during the night.
'Daylight' Carmen would be the same as she was before but less nosy and probably jumpy. I also think she'd try and warn people away and drop hints of what happens at night so someone could stop it.
'Moonlight' Carmen would be murderous. She'd probably like messing with the guards heads but would hang back on the first night just to get a general idea of how they react to the animatronics.
I'd also give the 'dormant Carmen' a voice inside the others head that would get louder and louder the closer it got to night/day.
The poem itself is told by night time Carmen, clearly since she regards day time Carmen with disdain and annoyance. I guess she might have gotten bored and written it one night or something.
'Daylight' Carmen would be the same as she was before but less nosy and probably jumpy. I also think she'd try and warn people away and drop hints of what happens at night so someone could stop it.
'Moonlight' Carmen would be murderous. She'd probably like messing with the guards heads but would hang back on the first night just to get a general idea of how they react to the animatronics.
I'd also give the 'dormant Carmen' a voice inside the others head that would get louder and louder the closer it got to night/day.
The poem itself is told by night time Carmen, clearly since she regards day time Carmen with disdain and annoyance. I guess she might have gotten bored and written it one night or something.
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